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Re: Changes to the training programme

Dear Mr Zhang,

At first, allow me to extend my gratitude to you for what you have done in the training programme. Thanks to your effort, we're fully convinced that the training will be progressed successfully.

Secondly, I want to inform you of some changes in the proposed programme. Although we asked you to deliver the proposal training programme on 10 and 11 October ,that is this Thursday, we would be appreciative if you would be so kind as to send it on Tuesday .

Moreover, there's been some discussion about whether we should include 'teleconferencing' and 'video-conferencing' in the training.

With kind regards,

Your sincerely,

Mary Wang

HR Manager





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